Monday, May 20, 2013

Team Krista #7: THE EXTRAORDINARY ART OF FALLING

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15 comments:

Maggie Young said...

Sounds very intriguing. Love your concept. Good luck!

Marieke said...

Oh I just love your voice <3 It's so gorgeous! Love this concept too, and Bria sounds like such an awesome MC! Good luck!!! :D

(And um, send this to me, kay? <3)

Tracey Joseph said...

I certainly think your premise is very timeless, and I love your writing. :D

michelleimason said...

I love the way she's too cool for the most popular boy in school. I hope you get lots of votes!

Noelle Henry said...

I LOVE the changes you've made to this one! Well done! I also love that Bria is not the typical contemporary YA heroine. And I want to read the rest of this one RIGHT NOW!!! :) Good luck!

Copernicus Nerdicus said...

This sounds GREAT, and your voice is phenomenal. Awesome job- good luck!

Ashley Turcotte said...

I adore the concept of this one. Bria sounds like a contemporary character I'd love to read about. And the writing in your first page is absolutely beautiful. Good luck in the contest, and go Team Krista!

Jennie Bailey said...

So much LOVE for this one! This concept just sucked me in from the first sentence. I want to read more! The changes have taken an already excellent beginning and made it stronger than I could imagine! Good luck with this!

Laura said...

This was one of my favorite entries from the beginning of TWV. I love the idea of seeing these two people — from completely different worlds — fall in love. And you've given Bria such a great voice. I want to read this!

L. T. Host said...

Love the first para of your query. Dripping with voice and personality. Best of luck! :)

mysticcooking said...

This sounds like a perfect summer read. Great voice, solid writing - looking forward to seeing this book on the shelf someday soon!

Sarah J. said...

Love it! I love that the artsy girl wants to do accounting. Definitely a different take for YA!

Christa Heschke said...

Would love to see this!

Rachel OLaughlin said...

I love what you did with the query. Even shinier than before!
Totally cheering for this one!!!
<333

John Rudolph said...

I'd love to take a look. Thanks.