Title: MYSTIC
COOKING
Genre: Upper MG
fantasy
Word count: 78,000
Query:
At fourteen, Lailu is the youngest chef to graduate from Chef’s
Academy in over three hundred years, and she’s not about to let anything get in
the way of her dream: opening a high-class restaurant that specializes in
cooking mystical beasts.
With her new steam-powered stove, Lailu is positive her
restaurant will be a huge success. Sure, she had to borrow a ton of money from
Mr. Boss, the meanest loan shark around, but she knows her profits will more
than make up for it. Unfortunately, her obnoxious school rival Greg decides to
open a competing restaurant, and with his charm, good looks, and aristocratic
background, he soon has a full house--while Lailu’s place remains a dining
graveyard.
When Mr. Boss pushes up the due date of Lailu’s loan, she
realizes she’s bitten off more than she can chew. Lailu has battled dragons,
krakens, griffons, and all sorts of delicious and dangerous beasts, but she’s
never faced anyone as ruthless as Mr. Boss. With her deadline approaching,
she’s forced to turn to the one person who can help. Obnoxious or not, Greg is
almost as good a chef as Lailu, and it will take all of their combined
skills to get her out of the stew she’s in. After all, Mr. Boss always gets
what’s owed to him, one way or another.
First page:
Lailu
flipped a large chef’s knife end over end, scowling at the row of onions pinned
to her far wall. She could have taken on another kraken or even a hydra right
then, but this waiting--this
waiting was killing her.
"Don't
worry," she told her remaining batch of onions, "it will only hurt
for a second." As she selected a sweet yellow one, the bell above her
front door chimed.
Lailu
whipped around eagerly, the onion toppling to the floor. She straightened her
fluffy white chef’s hat. “Welcome to Mystic Cooking. Our special today is…” Her
eyes flickered to the man looming in her doorway. "Oh. It's you."
For all that
she was barely over five feet tall, Mr. Boss, “call me Victor,” was not much
taller, but his back was straight, and his cane seemed more like a threatening
prop than a tool. He looked like he might be in his sixties or seventies, his
long gray hair streaked through with white and oiled back into a ponytail at
the nape of his neck. She'd heard the rumors, of course, that he was actually
two hundred and six and that he bathed in the blood of young dragons every
month to slow his aging. Lailu wasn’t sure she bought that; she knew how hard
it was to kill a dragon.
Mr. Boss
glanced at the line of onions pinned to the wall, then turned, taking in the
spotless and very empty dining room. “Busy, I see."
I love this concept! A fourteen-year-old chef cooking mystical beasts?! AWESOME. Good luck! :D
ReplyDeleteThis is SO fun! You have such an awesome voice. The writing just leaps off the page. What a perfect MG concept and it's executed beautifully. Best of luck!
ReplyDeleteWhat a unique concept! A restaurant serving dangerous beasts she's killed herself? I want to read more of this. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteI was drawn into this immediately because of the unique concept, but your voice makes it that much better! GOOD LUCK!
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like so much fun! A chef who cooks mythical beast is my kind of MG heroine! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteThis looks like it would be such a fun read! I absolutely love the concept, and the voice in your opening 250 is fantastic. Good luck in the agent round! Team Krista FTW!
ReplyDeleteSo much FUN! I can hardly stand not to read more!! I have loved this from the beginning of the competition. It's such a fantastic idea - one that is so appealing! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteThis was one of my favorite entries from the beginning. I'm glad it's on Team Krista!
ReplyDeleteWhat a fun concept! Good luck :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent query. I want to eat at Lailu's restaurant! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with everyone else: this is so much fun! Good luck! ^_^
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely want to see this!
ReplyDeleteSure, I'll take a look. Thanks.
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