Genre: YA historical
Word count: 73,000
Query:
All seventeen-year-old Angelique Saint-Clair wants is the freedom to choose her own fate. But to guarantee protection for herself as a free woman of color, she has been taught that she must sign a contract with a wealthy Creole gentleman--not as his wife, but as his mistress. Her mother has trained her well for her first quadroon ball, where Angelique meets the kind and wealthy Monsieur LeBlanc. Unfortunately, at the same ball, Angelique discovers the depth of her feelings for another man, who happens to be both LeBlanc’s half-brother and her impoverished piano instructor.
Determined to secure her daughter’s future, Marguerite Saint-Clair encourages negotiations with LeBlanc, forcing Angelique to choose between protection and love. Just when Angelique decides to follow her heart, yellow fever strikes, threatening her mother’s life. Angelique’s dream of pursuing her music with the man she loves burns up with the fever ravaging the city. To provide for her mother’s care, Angelique takes the contract to LeBlanc, only to discover he has already left New Orleans. Now Angelique’s survival depends on the one person she’s never fully believed in: herself.
First page:
New Orleans, 1825
Masks
cover only so much. I twirl the silk-wrapped stick and watch the attached mask
circle above my hand like a bird. Flawless dove feathers rise from the right
corner, but when I brush my fingertips along the edge, the feathers just itch
instead of tickle. I raise the mask over my face, peering out through eyeholes
that once seemed so much wider. It has been years since I believed I could be
anything if only I imagined it.
I try to
pretend I am at the piano instead of surviving another fitting, but the
seamstress pushes a pin through the satin covering me and traps me in reality.
My fingers clench, and the stick cracks in two.
“Angelique,”
Maman says as she accepts the broken pieces. Her pinched lips relax as she
turns back to the seamstress and waves her other hand toward the dress. “It
looks exquisite.”
Maman
requires no mask. She has perfected the art of pretending we are better off
than we are.
Thick raindrops
plunk on the wooden banquette that lines the street. I hear more than see them
beyond the front window of our cottage on Dumaine. The walkways have soaked up
so much water lately that they have warped in the perpetual humidity. At least
the afternoon showers relieve some of the stench that covers the city at this
time of year.
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