tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post5368776010921681343..comments2024-02-27T03:36:20.256-07:00Comments on Krista Van Dolzer: Team Krista #4: WISHINGKrista Van Dolzerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08830193414560232842noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-81804087546953251582013-05-24T19:32:33.875-06:002013-05-24T19:32:33.875-06:00You've been ninja'd! I would love to see a...You've been ninja'd! I would love to see a pitch, one-page synopsis, and the first fifty pages. Please send it as a word attachment to...(contact Krista/Brenda for further details!). Looking forward to reading your work :)<br /><br />--RED NINJAAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-51991833837389319792013-05-23T14:35:53.743-06:002013-05-23T14:35:53.743-06:00Great voice -- I would love to read more!
MonikaGreat voice -- I would love to read more!<br /><br />MonikaMonika Vermahttp://levinegreenberg.com/monika-verma/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-21067251278869319872013-05-23T14:10:27.920-06:002013-05-23T14:10:27.920-06:00I'd love to see this!I'd love to see this!<br />Caryn Wisemannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-4383556690659256052013-05-23T10:03:16.230-06:002013-05-23T10:03:16.230-06:00Sounds interesting. I want this!Sounds interesting. I want this!Neverending Storieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07208372391002820746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-8559433266795958952013-05-23T07:46:06.879-06:002013-05-23T07:46:06.879-06:00This is fun! I'd love to read more.This is fun! I'd love to read more.Ammi-Joan Paquettenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-49292614615400758722013-05-21T07:50:38.482-06:002013-05-21T07:50:38.482-06:00Your voice in the first 250 is spot on, and I just...Your voice in the first 250 is spot on, and I just love the premise - such a refreshing take on magic use!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-17085089103279988382013-05-20T22:46:52.956-06:002013-05-20T22:46:52.956-06:00What a great spin on magic...selling it! Good luck...What a great spin on magic...selling it! Good luck and go Team Krista!Jessie Oliveroshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06232456334069794107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-61016105262168826992013-05-20T22:31:31.977-06:002013-05-20T22:31:31.977-06:00I LOVE this beginning. The voice, the perfect worl...I LOVE this beginning. The voice, the perfect world-building and the perfect set up. I WANT to keep reading!!!Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17244475646807937843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-56793761669916244942013-05-20T22:11:40.609-06:002013-05-20T22:11:40.609-06:00SUCH a unique idea. I feel like magic in YA is ove...SUCH a unique idea. I feel like magic in YA is overdone, but then I see this and get hooked and think, "I'd totally read this."<br /><br />And I love the voice in your first 250!Laurahttp://laurajmoss.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-46116896589167047032013-05-20T22:06:12.665-06:002013-05-20T22:06:12.665-06:00Fascinating! I want to read more! Good luck :)Fascinating! I want to read more! Good luck :)L. T. Hosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12448176940211118898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-34834611594759322542013-05-20T18:21:48.726-06:002013-05-20T18:21:48.726-06:00This sounds so so good!This sounds so so good!ilimahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17899071063752311737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-64184089242180326602013-05-20T17:28:15.336-06:002013-05-20T17:28:15.336-06:00Wow - just WOW! I love this concept and your first...Wow - just WOW! I love this concept and your first 250 are SO strong!! Excellent job!Jennie Baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02088195986628533511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-58431329165149351802013-05-20T17:01:53.102-06:002013-05-20T17:01:53.102-06:00You have a fantastic voice in your opening, and I ...You have a fantastic voice in your opening, and I just love this concept. Good luck in the contest! And go Team Krista!Ashley Turcottehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07641064437873182899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-75961783590170127122013-05-20T16:18:24.862-06:002013-05-20T16:18:24.862-06:00THIS is what contemp fantasy should be! A perfect ...THIS is what contemp fantasy should be! A perfect melding of the ordinary and the fantastic. Great stakes and a solid voice. Good luck!Jenny Kaczorowskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00289053983485597342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-84799828146898486772013-05-20T11:03:01.676-06:002013-05-20T11:03:01.676-06:00I love the premise here, and your voice is so powe...I love the premise here, and your voice is so powerful it draws me right in. Good luck!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03926485525082822436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-29469208915275176812013-05-20T10:47:09.402-06:002013-05-20T10:47:09.402-06:00I love the contrast with the magic and real life, ...I love the contrast with the magic and real life, especially the line about the calculus test. Good luck!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-22466877058567284402013-05-20T10:36:05.773-06:002013-05-20T10:36:05.773-06:00This is a FABULOUS concept! I love it! Your writin...This is a FABULOUS concept! I love it! Your writing really shines through in both the query and the opening words. You've definitely got that 'spark'. AWESOME job! Good luck!Noelle Henryhttp://noellehenry.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-16490439352015898222013-05-20T10:06:05.410-06:002013-05-20T10:06:05.410-06:00I love how this is such a quintessential YA concep...I love how this is such a quintessential YA concept, in wonderfully magical new clothes. Great job! Good luck!Mariekehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16383960692054256957noreply@blogger.com