tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post1913653339580414639..comments2024-02-27T03:36:20.256-07:00Comments on Krista Van Dolzer: Team Krista #9: A PRETTY PIRATE PICKLEKrista Van Dolzerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08830193414560232842noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-23465419163273707242013-05-23T21:19:49.096-06:002013-05-23T21:19:49.096-06:00I'd love to see this!I'd love to see this!shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09327843436654619612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-24127520388354051802013-05-21T18:11:25.819-06:002013-05-21T18:11:25.819-06:00<3! Good luck :)<3! Good luck :) L. T. Hosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12448176940211118898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-61185724611398297022013-05-21T13:21:55.379-06:002013-05-21T13:21:55.379-06:00Yay, go MG! I just love the voice in your first pa...Yay, go MG! I just love the voice in your first page! Also anything that combines swashbuckling adventure with a strong female protagonist is great in my book. Good luck!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-8224170526343205002013-05-20T21:59:38.514-06:002013-05-20T21:59:38.514-06:00There are so many details and such great voice in ...There are so many details and such great voice in your entry. It sounds like such a fun read! It stuck in my head from the first 150, so I'm psyched you're on Team Krista!Laurahttp://laurajmoss.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-80720818530683220242013-05-20T17:38:35.024-06:002013-05-20T17:38:35.024-06:00'But not before she makes a mistake more epic ...'But not before she makes a mistake more epic than the iceberg that sank the Titanic and ends up literally hanging for her life.' - I am DYING to know what this is. DYING, I tell you. There is so much 'adorbs' in this, as my niece says (which I'm pretty sure stands for adorable in MG speak). Your voice just shines through in the query and the first 250. Good luck!Jennie Baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02088195986628533511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-2526781583822249612013-05-20T16:44:24.414-06:002013-05-20T16:44:24.414-06:00The query does a great job of drawing me in. I def...The query does a great job of drawing me in. I definitely want to read this to find out what happens, and especially after that last line! Not to mention the great voice in the 250. Really excited to see what happens with this one in the agent round. Go Team Krista!Ashley Turcottehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07641064437873182899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-34513797559838616412013-05-20T15:37:16.104-06:002013-05-20T15:37:16.104-06:00This makes me smile every time! I love your concep...This makes me smile every time! I love your concept and your voice. I want to squeeze Liza to bits, although I have a feeling she'd get me that wooden sword first!Jenny Kaczorowskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00289053983485597342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-88538341011210475262013-05-20T10:52:39.971-06:002013-05-20T10:52:39.971-06:00Sign me up! I loved this since day one - Query + V...Sign me up! I loved this since day one - Query + Voice are spot on! Good luck!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03926485525082822436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-74234596061404933962013-05-20T10:48:14.558-06:002013-05-20T10:48:14.558-06:00Pirates? High seas adventure? Yes! What a great co...Pirates? High seas adventure? Yes! What a great concept for MG! Your voice leaps off the page and promises a super fun, exciting read. So awesome! Good luck!Noelle Henryhttp://noellehenry.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-91057962601343368742013-05-20T10:40:43.070-06:002013-05-20T10:40:43.070-06:00Oh my goodness, I just want to read this! The voic...Oh my goodness, I just want to read this! The voice! The dread pirate Henry! The cruise ship! AWESOME. Good luck!Mariekehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16383960692054256957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4250988928163509961.post-62624077284744743672013-05-20T10:24:57.326-06:002013-05-20T10:24:57.326-06:00Oh, I love the voice in this--the query and the fi...Oh, I love the voice in this--the query and the first 250. It just drips character. <br /><br />I'm so glad you won this one, Krista!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com